Sharping

The article is helpful since the writer explains ways how many writers often use words to much. The excessive use of the word it, is targeted and explained how to change sentences and how to not use the word so much. The article explains how many words are used too much in sentences and how to cut these smaller words out to make sentences more clear. Cut out the smaller word and make the sentences shorter and more to the point and not fill then up with words not needed. Using many of these small words it, is to be, using these words often make sentences too long and cutting them out can make them more clear and understanding. To sum up what I got from the reading was using weak smaller words can make many sentences dull and more complex than what they should be. Removing these words can make sentences less crowed and more clear to readers.